Wednesday 26 October 2011

Please correct my English-C?

As internet become widespread, the style of hotel booking business is changing by offering flexible rates based on room availability or setting a low price for its high cancel charge, led by Europe and U.S. Additionally, overseas big hotel chains employ “Best rate guarantee”, a special rate through booking directly through the hotel, which adds another option for those who make reservations. However, most of overseas hotel booking sites in Japan offer a fixed price with twice yearly fee modifications, which sometimes results in higher rate than local hotel booking websites.
Please correct my English-C?
It's actually really good !! :) I just tweaked it here and there :



As the internet has become widespread, the style of hotel booking business is changing by offering flexible rates based on room availability or setting a low price for its high cancel charge, led by Europe and U.S. Additionally, overseas big hotel chains employ “Best rate guarantee”, a special rate through booking directly through the hotel, which adds another option for those who make reservations. However, most of the overseas hotel booking sites in Japan offer a fixed price with twice yearly fee modifications, which sometimes results in higher rate than local hotel booking websites.



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Please correct my English-C?
Hey I think this turned out great: (fixed it a bit!)



As the internet has become more widespread, the style of the hotel booking business is changing by offering flexible rates based on room availability or setting, paired with a low price for its high cancel charge. This trend is led by Europe and the U.S. Additionally, overseas big hotel chains employ “Best rate guaranteed”, which is a special rate for booking directly through the hotel, adding another option for those who make reservations. Most overseas hotel booking sites in Japan offer a fixed price with twice yearly fee modifications, sometimes resulting in higher rates than local hotel booking websites.